Your Questions About Self-image Quotes

Can you please help me edit this critical letter to my father?

Can you please edit this very important letter for me below? Pretty please. Please provide some really good edits as it is a letter to my father.

Look for:
1. Grammer
2. Spelling
3. Syntax
4. Form
5. Repetitive words etc. etc.
6. Whatever else you find and suggest and edit
7. Better way of saying something
8. Make sure I know which are the edits. somehow if you could.

______________________________________…

May 29, 2010

Dear Blank:

I am writing you this letter, as I am not sure you received my first one. I tried to confirm this by leaving you a phone message. I did not want to leave another message as do not wish to bother anyone.

Since writing you my first letter, things have become much better for me. In fact, it was a very cathartic experience as I was finally able to RELEASE the memory of that day. After I wrote that letter I was able to forgive myself and others. I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances.

Eventually it became apparent I was letting the negative events and individuals of that day adversely affect me. I was letting it affect my self-esteem, self-image, self-worth and thus my soul. This only helped me to discover something called “self-acceptance”. That regardless of my past mistakes, I am still a wonderful person. I am still beautiful no matter how others may have treated me or what others may have written about me in your system.

What matters most is what I think of myself. As long as I know that I am a good person, there is nothing that anyone can say or do to change that. People can gossip and write all the disparaging remarks, but it no longer affects me. I realized it is just their erroneous opinions, thoughts, comments, theories, words, beliefs, assumptions, perceptions, feelings, judgments, attitudes and perspectives. It’s all subjective unless you really know the person. In short, it is just their minds and opinions, which cannot hurt me.

In conclusion, my soul has been restored. I am once again happy, bubbly, free – spirited and loving. Above all, I still love myself!

Anyhow, I wanted confirmation that you received my initial letter. I was hoping you would share your thoughts or comments. I hope you receive this final letter. I would love to hear from you either way via email or phone. If not, I totally understand and you wish all the best.
Email: ----------------------------------------…
Phone: -----------------------------

I conclude with my favourite quote from the Movie Gia.

Life and Death
Energy and Peace
If I stopped today, it was still worth it
Even the terrible mistakes that I have made and would have unmade if I could
The pains that have burned me and scarred my soul
It was worth it
For having been aloud to walk where I walked
Which was to hell on earth
Heaven on earth
Back again
Into
Under
Far in between
Through it
In it and above

Kindest Regards,

Mrs. Blank
B.A & B.S.W (Dean’s Honours List)

Can you please help me edit this letter? Pretty please?

Can you please edit my letter? Are you good at editing?
Can you please edit my letter for grammer, spelling, syntex, form, rephrase, content etc etc.
THANK YOU SO MUCH in advance.

provide the edits in caps and coments or copy the sentece as edited
______________________________________…

Letter:

June 7, 2009

Dear Mr. Blank:

I am writing you this letter, as I am not sure you received my first one. I tried to confirm this by leaving you a phone message. I did not want to leave another message or call again. A little birdie told me I can no longer phone there to chat.
(I just shake my head in disbelief & disappointment – goodness gracious people!)

Anyhow, since writing you my first letter, things have become so much better for me. In fact, it was a very cathartic experience as I was finally able to RELEASE the memory of that day. After I wrote that letter I was able to forgive myself and others. I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances. So I moved on and no longer look back.

Eventually it became apparent I was letting the negative events and individuals of that day adversely affect me. I was letting it affect my self-esteem, self-image, self-worth and thus my soul. This only helped me to discover something called “self-acceptance”. That regardless of my past mistakes, I am still a wonderful person. I am still beautiful no matter how others may have treated me or what others may have written about me in your system. A little birdie told me what comments have been written about me. This is why I am NOT comfortable phoning ever again.

What matters most is what I think of myself. As long as I know that I am a good person, there is nothing that anyone can say or do to change that. People can gossip and write all the disparaging remarks, but it no longer affects me. I realized it is just their erroneous opinions, thoughts, comments, theories, words, beliefs, assumptions, perceptions, feelings, judgments, attitudes and perspectives. It’s all subjective unless you really know the person. In short, it is just their minds, which cannot hurt me.

In conclusion, my soul has been restored. I am once again very happy, bubbly, free – spirited and loving. Above all, I still respect and love myself!

Anyhow, I wanted confirmation that you received my initial letter. I was hoping you would share your thoughts or comments. I hope you receive this final letter. I would love to hear from you either way via email or phone. If not, I totally understand and you wish all the best.

Email: ---------------
Phone: ___________

I conclude with my favourite quote from the Movie Gia.

Life and Death
Energy and Peace
If I stopped today, it was still worth it
Even the terrible mistakes that I have made and would have unmade if I could
The pains that have burned me and scarred my soul
It was worth it
For having been aloud to walk where I walked
Which was to hell on earth
Heaven on earth
Back again
Into
Under
Far in between
Through it
In it and above

Kindest Regards,

Ms. Blank
B.A & B.S.W (Dean’s Honours List)

Can you please edit this for me?

Can you please edit this very important letter for me below? Pretty please.
Look for:
1. Grammer
2. Spelling
3. Syntax
4. Form
5. Repetitive words etc. etc.
6. Whatever else you find and suggest and edit

______________________________________…

May 29, 2009:

Dear Blank:

I am writing you this letter as I am not sure you received my first one. I tried to confirm this by leaving you a phone message. I did not want to leave another message as do not wish to bother anyone. This is also another reason I rarely call.

Since writing you my first letter, things have become much better for me. In fact, it was a very cathartic experience as I was finally able to RELEASE the memory of that day. After I wrote that letter I was able to forgive myself and others. I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances.

Eventually it became apparent I was letting the negative events and individuals of that day adversely affect me. I was letting it affect my self-esteem, self-image, self-worth and thus my soul. This only helped me to discover something called “self-acceptance”. That regardless of my past mistakes , I am still a wonderful person. I am still beautiful no matter how others may have treated me or what others may have written about me in your system.

What matters most is what I think of myself. As long as I know that I am a good person, there is nothing that anyone can say or do to change that. People can gossip and write all the disparaging remarks about me, but it no longer affects me. I realized it is just their thoughts, opinions, comments, theories, words, beliefs, assumptions, perceptions, politics, philosophies, assertions, feelings, judgments, attitudes and perspectives. In short, it is just their minds, it cannot hurt me.

In conclusion my soul has been restored. I am once again happy, bubbly, free – spirited. caring and loving. And yes, above all, I still love myself!

Anyhow, I had wanted to receive confirmation that you received my initial letter. It was my hope that you would share your thoughts or comments. Therefore, I would love to hear from you either way via email or phone. If not, I totally understand and you wish all the best.

Email: ------------------------------
Phone: ----------------------------

I conclude with my favourite quote from the Movie Gia.
(I added the comma - edit this portion too ok)

Life and Death
Energy and Peace
If I stopped today, it was still worth it
Even the terrible mistakes that I have made and would have unmade if I could
The pains that have burned me and scarred my soul
It was worth it
For having been aloud to walk where I walked
Which was to hell on earth
Heaven on earth
Back again
Into
Under
Far in between
Through it
In it and above

Kindest Regards,

Mrs. Blank
B.A & Bsc. (Dean’s Honours List)

What do you make of this criticism of the Left by the Left?

Here's a quote from an essay off of the Adbusters web site (of all sources):

'No matter what it claims for a self-image, in reality it’s the saddest collection of cowering, ineffectual ninnies ever assembled under one banner on God’s green earth. And its ugly little secret is that it really doesn’t mind being in the position it’s in – politically irrelevant and permanently relegated to the sidelines, tucked into its cozy little cottage industry of polysyllabic, ivory tower criticism. When you get right down to it, the American left is basically just a noisy Upper West side cocktail party for the college-graduate class.'

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'the American left has turned into a skittish, hysterical old lady, one who defiantly insists on living in the past, is easily mesmerized by half-baked pseudo-intellectual nonsense, and quick to run from anything like real conflict or responsibility.'

This from a magazine and organization with a solid liberal/leftist stance.

http://adbusters.org/the_magazine/71.php?id=271

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here is a quote i wrote and it kinda describes my life and i want to know if you like it: thanx

Addiction isnt what matters, the thoughts and feelings that follow make or destroy ones self image with tears of what was once the life that we knew and loved

BTW, i dont mean drug addcition,i mean a guy addiction

im having guy problems and when im sad i sit alone in my room with my music blasting writing in my "personal" journal and this is one of the things i wrote and i wanted to know if it was, meaning, good writing. thanx. i have more if you want them